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Thursday, February 15, 2007

The Franks Story


In our class like i have mentioned before we are reading The Diary of Anne Frank.Anne,her family,and her dad's friends go into hiding above an office.The office is filled with workers everyday until about six in the afternoon.Through that time Anne and her family and friends cant talk that much or even move around as much as you would usually do.They are all Jews and are running from the Nazis or the Green Police. Anne has been there for about 2 months now and Hanukkah comes.Nobody has any presents and as a surprise Anne has presents.She gives her mom ten hours of doing anything without whining or complaining.She gave her dad a scarf.A little while later someone had broken into the office below the below and peter had fallen and broke a lamp.His dad,Mr.Van Dann,got mad at him and starting yelling at him.Then Mr.Frank went down stairs to see who or what it was.Anne thought it was a trap.

2 comments:

Jennifer said...

Riki,
Check your grammatical errors.

Also, try to stay away from plot summaries. I want you to pick out something specific and write about your feeling. For example, if they are caught and your father blamed you, how would you feel? Things like that...

Mrs. C

Rainy Days said...

I need to right something like that.