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Wednesday, February 21, 2007

If I went into hiding


If I had to go into hiding like Anne Frank did I would bring my closest family members.My classmates had said there friends because they didn't like their parents or some negative reason about there parents,but I don't understand.Who paid for the house you live in,or the food you eat?That is the main question.I would definitely pick my mom,grandma,and my aunt.They are the closest family members I have besides my cousins.I would love to bring my cousins but I wouldn't know if they would survive or if I could tolerate them.I would bring my mom because she is like my best friend.I would also bring my aunt because I love her and she is like another mom to me.I would also bring my grandma because she knows how to cheer me up when I am down.I love them all so much.

2 comments:

Jennifer said...

Good, I'm glad you see what's important!

Grammar corrections - capitalize the I
Need a comma after "Anne Frank did," and "...love to bring my cousins, but..." Another one after "bring my aunt because I love her, and ..."
Wrong "there." You should be using "their" (possessive pronoun-you should know the difference by now)

Good blog!

Lost in a Dream said...

Thank You. Do i need to correct all the mistakes?
-RIki